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 Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application

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Ikazuchi Kumo
Leaf ANBU
Leaf ANBU
Ikazuchi Kumo


Posts : 38
Join date : 2009-07-07
Age : 27
Location : Crazytown TN

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Rank: Anbu
Village: Leaf

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PostSubject: Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application   Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application EmptyThu Mar 25, 2010 5:45 pm

Name of Bloodline: Hekireki-boushi

Rank of Bloodline: A-S rank

Description of Bloodline: People who have this Bloodline naturally have sapphire blue eyes, but when the Bloodline is activated the Iris turns gold with blue streaks branching out from pupil that resemble lightning, that has also turned blue. If the user uses this technique too long (limit at A-rank is ten post, and at S-rank the limit is fifteen posts before his eyes close.) his eyes will close and will be impossible to open for two posts total. When the user's eyes glows gold this means that he is about to use a innate technique that has no name to make the user near deaf for a total of two posts. If the user's eyes glow blue it means the user is analyzing your jutsu finding a weak spot, but the user can only do this twice. If his eye's glow gold and blue that means that means that he is about to use his trump card technique, which as the others is without a name. The technique dsirupts all of the enemy's senses for one post, but this technique almost drains all of his chakra. There are five jutsu that come along with this Bloodline.

(Will add them to jutsu app.)
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KazeKage
KazeKage
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Posts : 36
Join date : 2010-03-18
Age : 33
Location : Shreveport Louisiana

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Rank: Kazekage
Village: Village Hidden In The Sand

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PostSubject: Re: Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application   Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application EmptyThu Mar 25, 2010 6:45 pm

Are the "Techniques" you speak of, techniques, or abilities of the eyes? If they are abilities, then there is no need to add said abilities to the jutsu application. And if you wouldn't mind, space out the Description a little to make it easier to read. In fact, now that I think about it, and this is only a suggestion, but make those Techniques you were talking about the abilities of the eyes. That will open up room for Jutsu based from the KKG if you'd like.
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Ikazuchi Kumo
Leaf ANBU
Leaf ANBU
Ikazuchi Kumo


Posts : 38
Join date : 2009-07-07
Age : 27
Location : Crazytown TN

Character sheet
Rank: Anbu
Village: Leaf

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PostSubject: Re: Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application   Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application EmptyThu Mar 25, 2010 6:56 pm

Those are just abilities that come with the eyes the jutsu are seperate
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KazeKage
KazeKage
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Posts : 36
Join date : 2010-03-18
Age : 33
Location : Shreveport Louisiana

Character sheet
Rank: Kazekage
Village: Village Hidden In The Sand

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PostSubject: Re: Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application   Ikazuchi Kumo's Bloodline Application EmptyThu Mar 25, 2010 7:33 pm

Approved.
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