Hybris!

General Character Info

Name: Hybris Kinkotsu Toukestu no Kaguya

Nickname/Alias: Succubus of the Hidden Mist

Age: 26

Birthdate: June 12, 19th Century

Gender: Female

Height: 5' 8"

Weight: 47.6 Kg

Appearance: Hybris stands five feet eight inches tall, weighing approximately fourty-six kilograms. Her build is rather athletic and she has good muscle tone that covers her body and slims her curves to the fullest extent. She works hard to keep that slim appearance, allowing her to be quick on her feet and yet a very strong hand-to-hand combatant when needed. It also hides her strength well, giving her quote the advantage when needed. She wears a tight black upper body piece of clothing. It is a long sleeved full neck piece, being able to pull it up over her head hiding her hair within it and when wearing a mask, that she often does, she can hide her appearance completely. She wears loose fitting black pants that seem harshly formal. On top of the tight uppder body piece, she wears the formal kimono that is a dark navy blue color. She wears black gloves over her hands and black boots to match.

She has several scars among her back, mostly her chest, back from the fights she has gotten herself into. But along those memorable scars she has memorable tattoos that fit her life style. She has several, the largest on her back, being the first tattoo that she recieved. She earned it shortly after joining the ANBU squad of the Stone Village, while staying in the capital of that country. The tattoo, roughly translated, is the kanji symbol for Death. Symbolizing her past, present and future. After that tattoo when she had stayed in the Land of Fang, she earned two more tattoo's. They reside on the back of both of her hands. On the back of the right hand, is the kanji symbol for assassination, and on the back of the left - Sin. Her final tattoo is on the back of her neck, the tattoo has much more meaning than the others, and is actually believed to be a cursed mark by those who have seen it, recognizing it as the Cursed Seal of Earth. She keeps that hidden at all times.

She wears a protective mesh underneath all of her clothing on her chest to hide it well. The mesh, is made of condensed steel, rendering taijutsu practically useless, but is condensed for light-weight movement. She keeps her main pouch filled with kunai, shuriken, and soldier pills on her left leg. Her second largest pouch, is on her right leg, containing multiple weapon summoning scrolls, but it more-or-less favors her right butt-cheek. These are kept secure to her body for the majority of the time, she also keeps them shut securely, even during fights, to avoid anyone being able to pick her pockets so to speak.

Personality: Hybris now appears to be indifferent, caring only for a few things around her. She spends a considerable amount of time practicing her perfect art of the Silent Killing Homocide technique, which requires absolute mastery of the Ninjutsu art. Kimimaro, a "father" of hers, claims that Hybris is a prodigy at the art of murder, as she has a habit of chopping off her victim's limbs or torturing them to the point where they want to suffer in an eternity of misery and pain, rather than escape and live. This shows the darker side to Xarias` personality, and a sign of things to come.

Hybris completely understands the meaning of life, and how close the bridge to death is. However, the matter is simply if her targets and enemies choose to walk across it. Currently, she has no moral value or qualms to her actions, and she will always repeat multiple things such as. "I know what death is like, and I have come to value life, the question is however.. Do you.." She believes that if every human on the planet wishes to truly respect the gift that God has given them, that their innocence and true person be tested in order to survive. If they evidentally escape the trap after doing what was needed, she will acknowledge them among the few who truly value life, those who fail however - She believes deserve to die.

* Expressively Haughty (e.g., acts in an arrogant, supercilious, pompous, and disdainful manner, flouting conventional rules of shared social living, viewing them as naive or inapplicable to self; reveals a careless disregard for personal integrity and a self-important indifference to the rights of others).

* Admirable Self-Image (e.g., believes self to be meritorious, special, if not unique, deserving of great admiration, and acting in a grandiose or self-assured manner, often without commensurate achievements; has a sense of high self-worth, despite being seen by others as egotistic, inconsiderate, and arrogant).

* Contrived Object-Relations (e.g., internalized representations are composed far more than usual of illusory and changing memories of past relationships; unacceptable drives and conflicts are readily refashioned as the need arises, as are others often simulated and pretentious).

* Insouciant Mood-Temperament (e.g., manifests a general air of nonchalance, imperturbability, and feigned tranquility; appears coolly unimpressionable or buoyantly optimistic, except when narcissistic confidence is shaken, at which time either rage, shame, or emptiness is briefly displayed).

* Expressively Disciplined (e.g., maintains a regulated, highly structured and strictly-organized life; perfectionism interferes with decision-making and task completion).

* Interpersonally Respectful (e.g., exhibits unusual adherence to social conventions and proprieties, as well as being scrupulous and overconscientious about matters of morality and ethics; prefers polite, formal and correct personal relationships, usually insisting that subordinates adhere to personally established rules and methods).

* Constricted Cognitive Style (e.g., constructs world in terms of rules, regulations, schedules and hierarchies; is rigid, stubborn, and indecisive and notably upset by unfamiliar or novel ideas and customs).

* Concealed Object-Relations (e.g., only those internalized representations, with their associated inner affects and attitudes that can be socially approved, are allowed conscious awareness or behavioral expression; as a result, actions and memories are highly regulated, forbidden impulses sequestered and tightly bound, personal and social conflicts defensively denied, kept from awareness, maintained under stringent control).

* Reaction Formation Regulatory Mechanism (e.g., repeatedly presents positive thoughts and socially commendable behaviors that are diametrically opposite one's deeper contrary and forbidden feelings; displays reasonableness and maturity when faced with circumstances that evoke anger or dismay in others).

* Compartmentalized Morphologic Organization (e.g., morphologic structures are rigidly organized in a tightly consolidated system that is clearly partitioned into numerous, distinct and segregated constellations of drive, memory, and cognition, with few open channels to permit interplay among these components).

* Solemn Mood-Temperament (e.g., is unrelaxed, tense, joyless and grim; restrains warm feelings and keeps most emotions under tight control).

* Inter-personally Abrasive (e.g., reveals satisfaction in intimidating, coercing and humiliating others; regularly expresses verbally abusive and derisive social commentary, as well as exhibiting vicious, if not physically brutal behavior).

* Combative Self-Image (e.g., is proud to characterize self as assertively competitive, as well as vigorously energetic and militantly hardheaded; values aspects of self that present pugnacious, domineering and power-oriented image).

* Pernicious Object-Relations (e.g., internalized representations of the past are distinguished by early relationships that have generated strongly driven aggressive energies and malicious attitudes, as well as by a contrasting paucity of sentimental memories, tender affects, internal conflicts, shame or guilt feelings).

* Isolation Regulatory Mechanism (e.g., can be cold-blooded and remarkably detached from an awareness of the impact of own destructive acts; views objects of violation impersonally, as symbols of devalued groups devoid of human sensibilities).

Relatives: Kimimaro Kaguya (Deceased)

Nindo: None.

Clan Information

Clan Name: Kinkotsu Touketsu no Kaguya

Clan Symbol: None.

Kekkei Genkai: The Kaguya clan hailed from Hidden Mist and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure, this ability is called Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways). They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their abilty to spurn the creation of new bones. However, the new leader of the clan, Hybris - Discovered a newly found trait. She can manipulate the blood cells, skin, and muscles inside of her body as well.

After finding out a new and explicit way to fuse a newly found element, Chill Release, with the her own evolved clans kekkei genkai, she has created a new type of bone release for the primitive Shikotsumyaku techniques. She can now engulf her own body, or her own bones with the freezing Chill Release gas, giving them a shattered and blue hue to them, as well as making her body incredibly cold. These bones can be used to puncture faster, freeze an enemy upon contact, and move more swiftly thanks to molecules being shifted in position as the gas takes its toll upon them. Of course, causing some bones to break on forceful contact, shards will be exerted as well, puncturing and piercing the enemy that dares be in the wake unto this jutsu.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Highly advanced version of Shikotsumyaku.

Clan History: N/A

Rank/Village Information

Rank/Classification: Akatsuki

Village: None.

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: Mastery Ninjutsu, Mastery Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity: Water naturalite, Fire naturalite (Naturalite basically means nano-element. They produce smaller effectiveness and vary in size, but cause a small considerable amount of damage.)

Fighting Style: Assassination.

Equipment: Name: Echoing Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play somewhat of an 'illusion' on the enemy, making them hear random noises that consist of running, walking, and even Hybris` very own voice, seeming to lull them into a deep state of anticipation, driving them mad. This does not mentally or physically change their train of thought or mental capacity, it just simply makes them believe that noises are being heard by their own ears, confusing them slightly.

Name: Optical Derangement Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play an accurately powerful optical illusion on the foes that are trapped inside, making them see images of Hybris` running at them, and even multiple images of Hybris will be displayed. However, when the image is struck by an enemy, it will simply disappear, and another image will attempt a strike. In addition, if the image just so happens to land a successful attack, and it hits the opponent - The mist around them will sharpen, increasing the attacks impact. This jutsu's clones do not physically harm the opponent, and is merely a small inter-dimensional form of a genjutsu. If the opponent believes they were stricken by a clone of Hybris, then and only then will the mist around the opponent sharpen and harm the enemy. If not, it will simply force the clone to disappear and initiate another clone in its place.

Name: Mist Igneous
Rank: S
Element: -
Description: Hybris will release a powerful and deadly toxin into the mist that surrounds her and any enemies present. The toxin slightly effects Hybris with a minor effect to the extent of which where it won't harm her insides, but however - If breathed in by the opponent (who would be unaware of the toxin, might I add since this jutsu is used in conjunction with the hidden mist, making it difficult to detect), they will be sickened to the point where they will painfully kneel in agony due to the inhalation of the toxic gas. This will take one post to come into effect. Then - The second stage of the Igneous puts an extremely lethal flammable substance into the mist which makes the mist resemble that of an A-Bomb if naturalite flame touches it. During this phase, the chakra of the mist changes along with the feeling and density of it. Although the density increases, the mist becomes considerably hotter, giving the opponent some leeway as to what is in effect. This takes one post, after the sickness effects the enemy. Luckily, if Hybris were ever to be caught in the explosion, she would quickly use her speed and Kinkotsu abilities to get out the area as quick as humanly possible.

Name: Jinsoku Hone Senpuu (Rapid Bone Whirlwind)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Involving a high speed dancing motion, and hardly imitating a Rock-Lee like whirlwind attack, Hybris will spin on her hands in circles, while bones shoot out of her body, sending piercing bullets in every direction doing a somewhat large amount of damage. Although the technique is powerful, it also bears a burden. The longer Hybris spins, the more heavy her entire body comes - making it harder to move and continue her jutsu, even after the ability is finished. After she is done; over time she will regain her speed as it was before.

~ All Hybris` Abilities:
Name: Kichigai Gaikotsu Kuro no Jutsu (Disgruntled Skeletal Clone Jutsu)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Using the Shikotsu Myaku Kekkei Genkai ability, Hybris has discovered a new form of her bone technique. She quickly performs the needed handsigns to use disposed or broken bones inside of her body to make lesser bone-like skeleton clones. These clones hit extremely hard, but are very poor in their defensive abilities. This means, the clones would strike, on a 1-10 scale chart 1 being the weakest 10 being the power of a hand-to-hand expert ninja strike, 5. Not enough to hurt the opponent immensely, but harm them physically. Their defense is so poor in fact, that it will simply shatter if hit by a moderately powerful strike.

Name: Corpse Bone Pathways - Tsume of Shukketsu - (Claw of Bleeding; Claw of Laceration)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Using her Corpse Bone Pathways ability, Hybris will allow claws to retract from her knuckles. These claws are razor sharp, and pointed on all sides. Once Hybris has cut the opponent, they will extend and drill deeper inside the enemies body ripping vital organs on the inside.

Name: Hitoshirenu Ansatsu Tekkunikku (Unseen Assassination Technique)
Rank: A
Element: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Description: During the Hidden Mist Technique, Hybris will completely extract the human and matter that makes up her body and make it unseen by any eye. Her atoms will completely break down into a smaller size than a 5 month old baby within the fetus, which is around 10-20 cm in length, making her practically invisible and unseen. She will also become completely unhearable due to her small stature at this point. However, once the opponent has been spotted by Hybris or sensed, she must return to normal size to give the opponent an attack that is worthy of enough striking power to hopefully kill them. This happens over the course of about 1-2 seconds. Which, for a ninja, is more than enough time to dodge and/or counterattack. Since these potential needs for combat have been extinguished from the enemy during the activation of this jutsu; this makes it one of the most effective assassination techniques ever created.

Name: Water Style: Water Vortex Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: The user makes a vortex made of water, surrounding the foe. Anything within its grasp, it will pull under. It rises up and can also surround the foe, trapping him/her in a barrier.

Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight. Then the user attacks while the opponent is helpless.

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: Creates one or more identical copies of the user out of water. these clones are capable of attacking.

Name: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: After a series of handsigns, they user makes a dragon made of water. It is very tall and strikes out of its own will.

Name: Muon Satsujin Jutsu (Silent Homocide Technique)
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hybris has mastered this art.

Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.


Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Jutsu no Kiri Ryokou (Jutsu of Mist Travel)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: After Hybris emits her mist jutsu, or is already surrounded by mist - She can then quickly disintigrate her body into the mist, dissapearing completely. Or so it seems. She is actually just swiftly jumping through the mist, but so quickly it cant be seen by the keenest human eye. Once concealed, she will be submerged, and unnoticable by the opponent. She will then strike from above, below, or behind to assassinate her target(s) quickly and clean.

Name: Kago Gaikotsu Joumae (Caged Skeletal Lock)
Rank: B
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: By performing the handsigns needed, Hybris disposes of bones in her body to create an enclosed area around her, covering the sides, front, bottom, and top, each bone wall to be about half an inch apart, allowing her to breathe. The bones are as hard as steel - As for making this technique nearly impenetrable, although there is a downside. The longer she keeps the wall up, the more immense amounts of chakra are used to keep said wall up. The walls can be shattered by any technique that is expertly coordinated with a high-ranking B-Rank technique, or a simple A-Rank taijutsu technique.

Name: Kunai' Oite Sono Kiri (Kunai in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a kunai coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the kunai enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the kunai is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the kunai in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the kunai pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out. These kunai move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately ten projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.

Name: Shuriken' Oite Sono Kiri (Shuriken in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a shuriken coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the shuriken enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the shuriken is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the shuriken in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the shuriken pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out. These shuriken move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately ten projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.

Name: Shurikunai Danmaku Kara Sono Kiri (Shuriken and Kunai Barrage from the Mist)
Rank: A
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will throw a scroll into the mist which will dissapear and form into the mist itself. Once the scroll has been enveloped by the mist, it will create hundreds of kunai and shuriken. The projectiles will be consumed by the mist, and dissapear completely. Hybris is capable of with-holding the jutsu due to her massive amount of chakra. She can do this, even when in the heat of battle. Once the opponent(s) are surrounded by mist, they will fall prey to Hybris` will to immediately disperse of the illusion and the kunai/shuriken will appear from the mist, heading in the direction of her enemy(ies). If the opponent(s) are struck by the shuriken or kunai they will be injected with a cancerous virus. Since there are so many projectiles at once this will increase the cancers effect massively. This virus burns the enemies insides, and rots there organs. These kunai and shuriken move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately twenty projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.

Name: Hybris' 7 sword weapon
Her sword: Calamity's Grasp.

Sword Description: The sword is completely made of ice. It is completely indestructable though, so it
cannot break. The ice shards extend into sharp points, capable of slicing and impaling targets easily,
puncturing them. A shard, found in the guard of the blade, glows along with Hybris' emotions. When it
is blue, she is calm and sirine. When it is red, she is angry and blood-hungry. The blade is as long as
Momochi Zabuza's. Since it is created by an element known as Everice, it is extremely heavy to
everyone but the true owner (Hybris). The sword is capable of releasing deadly toxins Hybris likes to
call, diseases.

Sword Length: As big as Zabuza Momochi's.
Sword Weight: If held by Hybris, its weight is merely a few ounces. If by anyone else, its over 30
pounds.

Sword Ability #1: Mist Style; Kusari of Aisu (Chains of Ice)
Effect: Once "Hidden Mist Jutsu" has been used, the sword released a diseased ice toxin into the air
that effects the area inflicted by Hidden Mist. Once the disease affects the target selected, it will
shackle them reducing their movement speed.
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Sword Ability #2: Mist Style; Shimo Netsu (Frost Fever)
Effect: Once the target is impaled, or is touched by the sword he/she will be inflicted with Frost Fever.
It will slow their attack speed, and slowly do ice diseased damage to them.
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Sword Ability #3: Mist Style; Keiro of Shimo (Path of Frost)
Effect: Allows Hybris to make the temperatures in the midst of Hidden Mist Jutsu to negative stature, that ranks almost 4x as low as freezing point.
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Sword Ability #4: Shadow style; Zokunen Shusseki (Unholy Presence)
Effect: Increases Hybris` attack, and movement speed by a very great amount.
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Sword Ability #5: Mist style; Ninmu of Sono Touketsu Ouza (Task of the Frozen Throne)
Effect: Near death, Hybris will impale the ground with the point of her sword, releasing a more
powerful type of a combination disease of Frost Fever, and Chains of Ice. It will root all enemies in
place, by having ice form from the mist surrounding them, keeping them in the ground. Unable to
defend themselves, or move, Hybris will activate her swords hidden ability: "Calamity's Grasp". It will
impale the targets with millions of ice shards in an instant, tearing the bodies to shreds.


History/RP Sample

History/Background Story: Birthing Arc: Hybris was born of the mother from the hailed Kaguya clan. The leader, Kimimaro, abandoned his position in the Mist Village after the brutal ongoing war between the Kaguya and Kirigakure. Leaving his daughter, Hybris, behind. Hybris was forced to live and grow up on her own.

Academy Student-Like Arc: By the age of 8, Hybris became a genious and incredibly powerful inheritor of the Shikotsumyaku bloodline technique, known as the Bone Manipulation or Corpse Bone Pathways Technique. She was able to take down people without seeing them, hearing them, or even knowing if they were there. She used this in conjuction to help her survive during tough times when it snowed incredibly hard and rained in Kirigakure. After the Hunter-Nin and Mist ANBU tracked her down however, she went on the run for her life.

Genin-Like Arc: By the age of 12, she had successfully and completely eluded the Mist ANBU and Hunter-Nin, escaping to the forests of Konoha. She lived rather primitively, but it was a suitable life for an abandoned runaway child ninja. She had already completely mastered the Bloodline technique, Shikotsumyaku. Taking on a new name, Heaven, she underwent explicit training in the village of Konoha. Simply devising the plan to become a Chuunin and further benefit herself, she used many people in 'friendships' and 'quarter-allies' to gain what she wanted. Once obtained, she murdered them. As the Chuunin exams came up, she only had a single foe whose name was Jebiza. She defeated him easily, and passed the exam with noone else being capable of showing up, due to the fact that Hybris had previously murdered them.

Chuunin Arc: Now a Chuunin, Hybris underwent a convincing disguise, traveling back to the Mist Village. In the midst of arriving back at the misty pines and flourishing creatures, she did battle with the Missing-Ninja, Zabuza Momochi. She defeated him, as well as almost murdering the Hunter-Nin Haku for interfereing with their battle. Zabuza offered Hybris a position in the Seven Legendary Swordsman. After taking his offering, Zabuza shortly died after at the hands of a street boss's thugs. Thus, defeating many ninja and enemies over the short months, Hybris quickly rose in ranks. Soon enough, at the mere age of 15, she became the leader of the Seven Legendary Swordsman of the Mist. In disbelief of the prossibility that he would be commanded by a mere child, Kisame Hoshigake engaged in battle with Hybris. After a long and grueling battle with the Akatsuki member, Hybris evidentally turned out on top due to her extreme physical performance and tactical genious. Kisame was poisoned extremely badly due to the injuries he sustained from Hybris` sword, Calamity's Grasp. Unexpectedly, however, Hybris ran into the Mizukage who was quite surprisingly, unknown of whom Hybris was. Hybris used this to her advantage and got the Mizukage, Utashi, to teach her the Lightning affinity, Lightning Palm Jutsu, and one of the most powerful lightning releases, Chidori. Once the training was complete, she decided to leave the Mizukage alone due to the fact that she didnt need any more pressure at the current moment in time. Then, one night while she was asleep - An unexpected visitor came to her house. His name was Daedalus, the Puppet Master. He came to invite her into the Akatsuki due to the leader, Zodiark's, request. She accepted his plea and went on a hunting spree for a ninja named Saishoku Willow. Hybris did intense combat with the diseased and cancerous nin, and came out on top - Assassinating him. Although this was merely a test, as Daedalus explained, Hybris was not amused and engaged in severely brutal combat with the puppet master. Doing extreme damage to him, Daedalus surrended in hopes to stop the madness. She left the premises while Daedalus was basically dismembered in all senses of the word on the floor of a random snow-trenched house that Saishoku was defeated in. She returned to Konoha, and assumed her former disguised nickname, Heaven.

Lead 7LS/Jounin Arc: Over the few 2-3 years, Hybris resided in Konoha - The Leaf Village. The Hokage, Naruto, awarded her for her valiance in brave actions and piercing necesity with the title of becoming an official Konoha Jounin. Still, the leader of the Swordsman, Hybris had been late to many missions and meetings due to the commotion of living both lives. She abandoned the Swordsman due to lack of productivity and conduct, and assumed her rightful position as a normal ninja of Konoha, no longer using the name Heaven - She used her normal name, Hybris Kaguya. The Hokage recognized the potential and desires Hybris had and had forgiven her for her mishaps and sins. In the midst of living in Konoha, Hybris went under a strict combatant training utilized by her. She quickly attained to all natural and elemental aspects of life. Now, Hybris is the sole possessor of the one true inner power, the clan she hailed from was not able to discover. She has altered the Kaguya's Shikotsumyaku clans biogenetic code, to create - Kinkotsu no Kaguya. A clan with the ability to manipulate blood cells, skin cells, and and muscle development. Since then Hybris hasn't seen or heard from any living remnant of the Kaguya clan minus two members; who are now dead as well.

Joining the Akatsuki: After Hybris was finished with her goals in her early adulthood, she came onto more advanced and complicated goals. Taking advantage of the opportunity, she joined the Akatsuki, after being reinvited.

RP Sample: As he became a Gennin of Kumo he would begin to understand the Ninja ways once more. Acting within a team wasn’t something he had wished for, so he chose to do very small easy missions for the time being. Keeping himself low key on the radar of the shinobi world. As he trained and wandered Kumo he met a girl, she was young and seemed like a younger and female version of him. Her name was Kana, she was a young Gennin of Kumogakure. He introduced himself to her, allowing her to slowly earn his respect. He had taken quite an interest in the young girl, she seemed to have gone through the same suffering in a way that he had, but not as far. But she was still young, and still had time to suffer, just as he has. So the two would begin to talk and get to know even more, Shingai didn’t share much of his history with her, he shared the loss of his family but nothing of the Hidden Mist Village, or the Hidden Stone Village to her. He had his reasons, he told no-one of Mist, and he swore to never reveal Stone to anyone. So the two would become close and in a spar to test her abilities Kana would use a Nara jutsu against him. It was there when he first became interested in the Nara Clan. The idea of manipulating one’s shadows could prove to be very useful for an assassin like him. He would ask her for the scrolls to the Nara techniques she had. She said she only had originals, and he promised to make copies, and so that is what he did, he would copy the information down from scroll to scroll as he finished he would hand Kana the originals and he kept the copies for himself. He thanked her for her trust in him, and praised her abilities as a shinobi. It was then where he made a promise to forever protect her. He saw her as a little sister of sorts, she was still rather young, and yet she suffered in many of the same ways as Shingai.

He would let her begin her training as he carried and trained the scrolls of the Nara Jutsu. He was feeling more and more at home here in the Land of Thunder. He didn’t mind being locked down on a short leash of the Village. He wandering the village one day and as he watched a song bird a boy in white would appear before him. All white, a hood masking his face, all but his mouth, where a grin seemed to reside. “May I ask you of your name?” Shingai asked the boy in white. He wouldn’t respond, nothing said, but a simple grin relaxing on the face of Kurogane Rokusho. The two would stand there on the streets of Cloud, both facing off, neither really in the mood to deal with each other. But Kurogane came for a reason; he had seen the boy around before and decided he needed to find out what his deal was. “My name is Kurogane Rokusho of Kumogakure,” the boy in white would state, he then would ask of Shingai’s name. He was afraid to answer Kurogane, for he had a suspicion rising about being caught for his past. “My name is Shingai,” he would state, hiding his last name from the boy in white. “You and I are the same,” Shingai would add, this threw Kurogane off for sure. “What do you mean?” he would ask in response. “You hide your face within the shadows of your hood, while I hide mine behind my many masks,” The words would be philosophical and quite well thought for such a short amount of time. “We both no doubt have suffered in the past, but it’s key not to dwell on such painful memories,” the added point would no doubt gain the respect of the White Cloaked Shinobi.

A year’s time had passed now and Shingai was offered the opportunity to join the Chuunin Exams with his fellow Gennin Team. He said he would gladly accept the offer once he spoke to his family. He had never told those of the Cloud Village that he was an Akumu yet, he had merely told them he was Shingai no Kujo. He would set off to the Land of Water in search of his homeland. A month’s travel it would require to reach the Island where the Akumu Village resided. He had entered the village with pride; offer a large amount of his Ryo as a Donation to the Village. One of the many respected Akumu had confronted him on the fact he had yet to learn any of the actual Akumu techniques. He had only learned and lived by their codes and honor system up till now. An argument would ensue from that point leading to the Elder quickly breaking the jaw of Shingai completely. Within time it would heal and the approval of joining the Chuunin’s would be granted. He was also given a large scroll containing the secret jutsu of the Akumu. He was to begin his training after the Exams and not return to the village until he had learned a majority of the jutsu, no matter the circumstance. So he would stay an extra week for he decided the time had come once more to begin crafting a new mask. The boy would sit in a small shack with a single light above him and no windows. So small it was more of a small shed if anything. He worked for a week on the new porcelain mask, the mask turned out to cover less of his face, and seemed more festive than anything. He would leave wearing the white mask that he crafted along with the black one. His journey back to Thunder would begin, and the start of the Exams were only two months away.

He would return to Cloud within a month since he left the Akumu Village. This left him with only a month to prepare and travel with his team to the Chuunin Exams which were being held in the Land of Tea. Within a few days of his return he was told to pack up once more and get ready to leave for a fight of his life. He would grin behind his white mask; the boy loved a good challenge, especially if he could kill his challenger. The bloodlust had been held in for sometime inside Shingai, he had the thirst once more, and these Exams would be sure to quench it more than enough. His team would travel with their Jounin Teacher all the way down to the Tea Country and when there they were told of the Exams he participated in when he was their age. Shingai would listen in hopes of gaining valuable information on the exams he was about to be a part of. Once they started, the first test would be one of the mind, something that would throw Shingai for a moment, but it was also a strong team test. His teammates would excel more in this test than he but all three had passed none the less. The second test of the Exams was a survival test, one that Shingai ahdn’t been run through by Ninja before. He’d killed several in his time but he’d never needed to worry about the creatures and the ninja. In this part he did not seek the items they were to obtain, he simply killed all of those who opposed him, his teammates would then search the bodies and find the items they needed. Shingai would add a total of six more bodies to his kill count before the third test could even begin. The teams were separated, now a battle of power, and art. A showing of skills of sort to those who chose to observe. Shingai would fight a very worthy opponenet from the Village of Mist ironicly. The two would fight to the extent of their power, but Shingai found a weakness in his opponent and quickly took advantage of it. Killing his opponent in cold blood as the Examiner attempted to intervene before he could deliver the final blow.

Great App. As expected from you that is. Other than that, welcome to the Akatsuki.

I deny this so freakin hard... I see god mode in a buncha of abilities + it is clearly listed in the weapons department nothing can be unbreakable



GM abilities I see

Name: Corpse Bone Pathways - Last Stand
Rank: -
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Hybris will take the curse seal to its highest limit, transacting her bloodstream, with pure calcium - The seal then draws markings from her chest, to cover her entire body. Her eyes become red, and she is filled with pure hate and anger, driven by those two sole emotions. The curse seal helps her gain top speed, around the speed of light - Her skin will slowly begin to turn into nothing but a bone-like exoskeleton, making her a lethal steel weaving opponent. She will gain massive strength, and agility. The downside is; the longer this form is with-held, the lower her full life-expectancy shortens. Overall, the form may only reach its full potential until the enemy she has chosens blood is dranken - She will then begin to recover, turning back to normal. If the enemy is not killed by the transformations deadline; Hybris will be killed instantly.

Speed... I mean c'mon? There has to be some form of limitation cause if you can move near light speed you can kill just about anything... Heck even take out a whole village in probably a second.

Name: Hitoshirenu Ansatsu Tekkunikku (Unseen Assassination Technique)
Rank: A
Element: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Description: During the Hidden Mist Technique, Hybris will completely extract the human and matter that makes up her body and make it unseen by any eye. Her atoms will completely break down into a smaller size than molecular potentiality, making her completely invisible and unseen. She will also become completely unhearable. Since these potential needs for combat have been extinguished from the enemy during the activation of this jutsu; this makes it one of the most effective assassination techniques ever created.

I also have a problem with this... Do I really need to spell it out?


Name: Mist Ignious
Rank: S
Element: -
Description: Hybris will release a powerful and deadly toxin into the mist that surrounds her and any enemies present. The toxin DOES NOT effect Hybris whatsoever, but however - If breathed in by the opponent (who would be unaware of the toxin, might I add since this jutsu is done without handsigns or movement), they will be rooted in place due to the inhalation of toxic gas. Then - The second stage of the Ignious puts an extremely lethal flamable substance into the mist which makes the mist resemble that of an A-Bomb if everignito flame touches it. Luckily, if Hybris were ever to be caught in the explosion, she would quickly use her speed and Kinkotsu abilities to get out the area in less then a split second.

As a side note... This also seems to be god mode... Mainly cause it seems completely undetected and pretty much completely unavoidable. Also it seems overpowered in terms of damage... Hell... The whole aiblity seems Over powered... Since it seems completely impossible dodge or block in any shape or form... Not even detectable.


Name: Shurikunai Danmaku Kara Sono Kiri (Shuriken and Kunai Barrage from the Mist)
Rank: A
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will throw a scroll into the mist which will dissapear and form into the mist itself. Once the scroll has been enveloped by the mist, it will create hundreds of kunai and shuriken. The projectiles will be consumed by the mist, and dissapear completely. Hybris is capable of with-holding the jutsu due to her massive amount of chakra. She can do this, even when in the heat of battle. Once the opponent(s) are surrounded by mist, they will fall prey to Hybris` will to immediately disperse of the illusion and the kunai/shuriken will appear from the mist, heading in the direction of her enemy(ies). If the opponent(s) are struck by the shuriken or kunai they will be injected with a cancerous virus. Since there are so many projectiles at once this will increase the cancers effect massively. This virus burns the enemies insides, and rots there organs.


This again sounds impossible to block or avoid.



Name: Kunai' Oite Sono Kiri (Kunai in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a kunai coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the kunai enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the kunai is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the kunai in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the kunai pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out.


Again sounds impossible to block or dodge.

Name: Jutsu no Kiri Ryokou (Jutsu of Mist Travel)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: After Hybris emits her mist jutsu, or is already surrounded by mist - She can then quickly disintigrate her body into the mist, dissapearing completely. Or so it seems. She is actually just swiftly jumping through the mist, but so quickly it cant be seen by the keenest human eye. Once concealed, she will be submerged, and unnoticable by the opponent. She will then strike from above, below, or behind to assassinate her target(s) quickly and clean.

Again too fast... Take it down a level


Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: -
Element: Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Needs to be ranked and taken down a level.

Name: Muon Satsujin Jutsu (Silent Homocide Technique)
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hybris has mastered this art.

Also what the heck is this? Give a description rank it.

Name: Optical Derangement Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play an accurately powerful optical illusion on the foes that are trapped inside, making them see images of Hybris` running at them, and even multiple images of Hybris will be displayed. However, when the image is struck by an enemy, it will simply disappear, and another image will attempt a strike. In addition, if the image just so happens to land a successful attack, and it hits the opponent - The mist around them will sharpen, increasing the attacks impact.

Illusions can't cause damage.


Name: Echoing Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play somewhat of an 'illusion' on the enemy, making them hear random noises that consist of running, walking, and even Hybris` very own voice, seeming to lull them into a deep state of anticipation, driving them mad.

You can't say "you have to go mad" Technically that will be a form of character control


Name: Kichigai Gaikotsu Kuro no Jutsu (Disgruntled Skeletal Clone Jutsu)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Using the Shikotsu Myaku Kekkei Genkai ability, Hybris has discovered a new form of her bone technique. She quickly performs the needed handsigns to use disposed or broken bones inside of her body to make lesser bone-like skeleton clones. These clones hit extremely hard, but are very poor in their defensive abilities.

I wanna see a limit on this

Name: Hekirekite no Jutsu- (Thunder Hands Technique)
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: A ninjutsu in which the user focuses the chakra in his hands so that they can create an electric shock able to give a sufficient shock to cause the heart to start beating again in case it stopped.


Lol? OPed(Over powered.) I am denying this flat out... Since it brings in the option for immortality for other people >.>

Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight. Then the user attacks while the opponent is helpless

No one is completely helpless regardless >.>

Name: Kago Gaikotsu Joumae (Caged Skeletal Lock)
Rank: B
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: By performing the handsigns needed, Hybris disposes of bones in her body to create an enclosed area around her, covering the sides, front, bottom, and top, each bone wall to be about half an inch apart, allowing her to breathe. The bones are as hard as steel - As for making this technique nearly impenetrable, although there is a downside. The longer she keeps the wall up, the more immense amounts of chakra are used to keep said wall up.

List an example with this please... As to what could break it. Just so we have a better grasp of the abilities


Also under your specialties you only have ninjutsu and taijutsu. Both cursed seal and the weapon you have listed (Still haven't read weapon hehe.) which sounds s rank from the length and the first paragraph. You need Kenjutsu as a specialty to have a weapon above C rank and to have a cursed seal (Custom.) you need Fuuinjutsu to have the custom deal >.>

Unlocked and moved back


Also I haven't looked over the weapon... Not till these are fixed

Well, heres a top off of the hat for you.

Im not changing anything, because if you can't get out of practically most of those jutsu that you listed yourself, obviously you shouldn't be combat roleplaying. I was told to directly post this app from another website by Ryuho, and it was approved that way. If im correct, which if im not, please CORRECT ME, Ryuho has a higher standing than you as an administrative mod.

Also, you misinterpret alot of jutsu apparently. Your questioning a simple C-Rank bone technique, as well as an illusion jutsu that doesn't ACTUALLY hit you, it makes the mist around you hit you. Like I said, you can delete this app, or whatever, but this is what I was told got approved, and it was approved. Is your reasoning backed behind the fact that my character has a multitude of advantages when the Hidden Mist Technique is activated because others cant carry out combatant moves as such when the Mist is ineffective, or is it simply because you find these techniques to be too "OP" for your standards. Look, I dont abuse jutsu, and I actually HAVE limits to what I can and cannot do. I also keep my chakra reserve and stamina in play during roleplay. And to considerably add to that, im a very good roleplayer. I know how to roleplay, and I've been in a fight that people got out or away from most of the techniques you posted.

As for that, please continue your rant.

First of all I am an admin. Second, I was discussing your character app with the head admin and we were discussing things that sounded God mode or over powered. If we have misunderstood then please add more clarification to the listed jutsus.

Nor am I insulting you in anyway. It is just different sites work differently from yours. We attempt to make sure no god mode or anything like the such gets in. If I have insulted you in anyway I apologize for it.

I'm going to make a few things extremely clear.

Staff Power

Ryusaki Gamma Kenshi----- Run everything

Kyra-----Runs everything but Ryusaki, Gamma, Kenshi

Below Kyra----yea....oh yea below Kyra=Not Ryusaki, Gamma, Kenshi

On another note, things here might be different from other sites, I don't just take one person into consideration and there skills, we try and make things fair for everyone. Besides if your as good as you claim, this shouldn't be too much of a set back. Nobody is ranting, just expressing our issues with your app. If you don't want to change anything, your not approved, not a big thing....

Thats completely understandable, and I appreciate your replying to my insulting post with a kind and fortunate manner. I apologize.. I was just having a bad day is all. I will fix them, and remove any jutsu that I re-read and dub overpowered. Sorry for the inconvenience.

I have deleted a multitude of jutsu, and further explained the jutsu you wished me to explain thoroughly.

Name: Muon Satsujin Jutsu (Silent Homocide Technique)
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hybris has mastered this art.

Still confused as to what this is... Need rank and description still.


Name: Mist Igneous
Rank: S
Element: -
Description: Hybris will release a powerful and deadly toxin into the mist that surrounds her and any enemies present. The toxin slightly effects Hybris with a minor effect to the extent of which where it won't harm her insides, but however - If breathed in by the opponent (who would be unaware of the toxin, might I add since this jutsu is used in conjunction with the hidden mist, making it difficult to detect), they will be sickened to the point where they will painfully kneel in agony due to the inhalation of the toxic gas. This will take one post to come into effect. Then - The second stage of the Igneous puts an extremely lethal flammable substance into the mist which makes the mist resemble that of an A-Bomb if naturalite flame touches it. During this phase, the chakra of the mist changes along with the feeling and density of it. Although the density increases, the mist becomes considerably hotter, giving the opponent some leeway as to what is in effect. This takes one post, after the sickness effects the enemy. Luckily, if Hybris were ever to be caught in the explosion, she would quickly use her speed and Kinkotsu abilities to get out the area as quick as humanly possible.


I will allow it. I just don't want to see some ginormous explosion



Name: Kunai' Oite Sono Kiri (Kunai in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a kunai coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the kunai enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the kunai is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the kunai in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the kunai pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out. These kunai move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately ten projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.

Name: Shuriken' Oite Sono Kiri (Shuriken in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a shuriken coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the shuriken enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the shuriken is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the shuriken in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the shuriken pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out. These shuriken move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately ten projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.

Name: Shurikunai Danmaku Kara Sono Kiri (Shuriken and Kunai Barrage from the Mist)
Rank: A
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will throw a scroll into the mist which will dissapear and form into the mist itself. Once the scroll has been enveloped by the mist, it will create hundreds of kunai and shuriken. The projectiles will be consumed by the mist, and dissapear completely. Hybris is capable of with-holding the jutsu due to her massive amount of chakra. She can do this, even when in the heat of battle. Once the opponent(s) are surrounded by mist, they will fall prey to Hybris` will to immediately disperse of the illusion and the kunai/shuriken will appear from the mist, heading in the direction of her enemy(ies). If the opponent(s) are struck by the shuriken or kunai they will be injected with a cancerous virus. Since there are so many projectiles at once this will increase the cancers effect massively. This virus burns the enemies insides, and rots there organs. These kunai and shuriken move fast enough to where they can be physically seen, falling at the rate a human being would by jumping from a 20 inch block of wood, but can be seen and dodged effectively. There is approximately twenty projectiles in effect during the activation of the jutsu.


I will accept all three. As they sound like they can be dodged or blocked now. (Still some slightly confusing wording but it isn't too bad xP.)



Only fix the first thing and you are good to go. (In terms of jutsu.) I will look over you weapon later. Since I am semi busy with something atm

Name: Muon Satsujin Jutsu (Silent Homocide Technique)
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hybris has mastered this art.

That technique doesn't have a description further than what I have.

The technique itself is applied while the Hidden Mist Technique is in effect. Much like what Zabuza had been doing during his fight against Kakashi. He actually USED this jutsu. Its his jutsu naturally.

Meh, so long as you don't go around saying "You can't defend for this" I'm fine and I doubt you would. Approved.

As for the other thing, its fine, everyone has a bad day.