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PostSubject: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 1:31 am

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Name:Shikamatsu

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Weight: 150 Pounds

Height: About 6"7

Age: Unknown

Gender: Male

Rank: Raikage

Village: kumogakure

Element(s): Lighting, Water

Personal Info

Family:N/A

Clan:N/A

Bloodline: Rinnegan

Tattoo(s):N/A
Scar(s):N/A

Looks: Shikamatsu (Done) Anime-1

Equipment

Weapon(s): Scythe, Chakra Disruption Blades, Paths

Armor:N/A

Equipment:Paths

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Bio: Years and years ago a young child by the name of Shikamatsu was born in kumogakure. Shika had been born into powerful Family that wielded great power...power that no one could imagine. At birth Shika was granted this power but wasn't able to use it because he was just a mere new born baby, but when he grew up he would wield great power. The Family hadn't really lived in the village, instead they lived in a small village not to far from kumogakure so that they didn't have to worry about any people because they weren't kind people. The parents didn't stand for much and for that they had to leave the village long ago before Shika was born. The reason for this was because the kumogakure shinobi feared that one day they would try and harm the villagers. It was quite unknown why they though about this but the parents didn't care they just thought of it disrespect so they took there leave in exchange of room from their kid to come back when he was born because they had been trying to have a kid. The First Raikage had agreed to this so they moved to a small village about 30 minuets away from the village so they could at once live at peace. By that time Shika's mom had been pregnant with him. About eight months later he was born allowing the parents have a child that would soon raise above everyone with his power. unforchantly when Shika was born his mother had died after giving birth to him leaving Shika's father to raise the kid.

A Couple years had passed and Shika had reached the age of eight so Shika and his father had moved back to the village so that he could be around people his age and get the knowledge that he needed. Shika's father was a shinboi but because of his age he had to retire but with his son being born it gave him something to do, but since Shikas age he couldn't teach him much. He did teach shika the main stuff that he did need to know and it helped a little but he was going to leave the Ninjutsu up to the academy when he joined which would be soon. About a week later Shika joined the academy learning stuff that he kind of already knew but learning it twice would allow him to never forget the things. Shika and the others were then taught Ninjutsu but only learning the main things that they needed to do. Everyone in the class didn't have any problems doing so but it was a small class only about six people. The six kids wer given a test to complete and they did so. Once they had finished the Chuunin teacher had matched up they ones that he thought would make a good squad then assigned them Jounin sensei's. The next day they were put into groups of two with three people total in them plus one jounin. They were all Genin now and were moved out of the academy so they could experience the life of a shinobi.

After getting acquainted with his Jounin sensei and the member's in his squad if he hadn't already. The Jounin Sensei wanted to immediately get started because he knew that they didn't have much time to train for the Chuunin exams but he also knew that they kids learned fast. First thing that the Sensei did was try and find out the elements that they three kids wielded, he also wanted to see who had the element that he had. Shika had Lighting, and the other two had Lighting as well so it was going to be a good ride for these three young shinobi. With the kids being Genin there wasn't to much that they could learn but he was going to try and teach them chidori if they could handle it. unforchantly, Shika was the only one to learn the Technique but it did take some time about over a month for him just to preform the Technique. Mostly the only reason for that was because Shika had great Chakra control and that's what his father was teaching him the whole time from when he was six to eight. Two years of training chakra was going to put a lot of strain on the young kids body but in the long run it all payed all because shika was able to learn something that others couldn't. For the next month the three shinobi were going to be leaning all about Taijutsu, Genjutsu, and little Ninjutsu just so they could be prepared for the exams when they came up next month.

As the month passed by Shika and the other two members of his squad were informed about the Chuunin exams so they had a week to get ready even though the Jounin sensei had taught them every thing that they needed to know. Still shika wanted to get more training in so he do so be having his father help him which made a big difference. quickly the week passed and it was time for the Chuunin exams. Shika had made his way to the place were the exams would be taking place and awaited his squad. Once they showed the Exams started and they were placed in sets so that they could take the first part of the exams which was the testing part. Shika and a couple others finished fast and once everyone finished they moved onto the final part which was the fighting section. Everyone was picked by random then had to fight. Shika was up first, and he had to fight someone from Suna but it wasn't any big deal to him because he beat the person within seconds of his first move. At the end Shika and some others were given the rank of Chuunin by the Raikage and also given a flap jacket that they were to wear at all times. With being a Chuunin now it was going to mean more work because they were given more missions and higher ranked ones at that too. Everything was going good for Shika tell his father had died but wasn't killed by someone just by old age. Shika took it bad and ever since then he more quiet and didn't really care about anything any more but being a successful shinboi. But Shika's father dieing was the best thing that happened to him because when he passed he left a scroll to the Rinnegan powers. Shika hadn't know that he could posses this power but once he found of it was his main thing in life to activate it. Shika had gotten the permission from the kage to take some time off and travel back to the little village just a little out of the Kumo to train himself. Shika spent about three years away from the village training himself and learning the powers of the Rinnegan, he had gotten his main body's which were Deva path, Human Path, and Animal path by killing the real person then taking his body. Shika wasn't able to use the body's yet but soon he would be able to after he found the right machine and materials to do so. For now shika was just going to return back to the village and continue his life as a shinobi.

After returning Shika was immediately given missions and all the good stuff but what he didn't know was that he was being tested because the Raikage knew he was a bit more powerful then before he left. After about a week or two Shika was promoted to the rank of Jounin, but was only a jounin for a little while because the Raikage saw great power in the young kid which gave him hope for Shika. The Raikage had formed a group of elite Shinobi within the village and Shika ran it as the captain allowing him to be called a S-Rank shinobi. This Group was called Anbu Black Ops and they were powerful dealing with any trouble that the village came across and they were given missions. Shika kind of took advantage of his power and when he killed he took the body's back with him so when he needed them he could use them, he only received three more making him have a total of six. One Day something big and bad happened though....The Raikage was assassinated by some Missing-nin. The Raikage was a missed shinobi, but the village needed a new leader before the missing-nin attacked again so the village council called a meeting and in the meeting Shikas name was mentioned. It had been decided that someone of the Pick from shika would take his place and he would take the Raikage spot. Shika greatly accepted the promotion, but he had to tell them his plan and that he main body would be taking over the village instead of him. The village council seemed fine with it since they were being controlled by Shika, he also told them that he was going to need a day or so to prepare himself and he did so. Shika had disappeared to the small abandoned village out side of the village, there he made a the place hidden so that no one could find it then entered the machine giving the paths chakra and life. [b]every path had special effect starting off with the main path which was the Deva path


Deva path.

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Then Animal path that has a great technique.

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Next was Human path.

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After that came Preta Path.

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Then Asura Path.

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Last is Naraka Path.

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Rp sample:

Animal path slightly smiled as he seen the Raikage him self approach the roof of his office. Animal path , Preta path and, Asura path were about to have some fun with the Raikage because the Akatsuki was there for two things and two things only. One to of course kill Raizo the Raikage, and also to take over the Cloud. The Akatsuki thought that if they could get one of there people as Raikage it would help with there major plan to destroy the world. But all three of the paths knew that this guy wasn't anything to just to mess around with...they were really going to have to try and fight him.

All three of the paths noticed that The Raikage had prepared himself for battle, he had withdrew some shuriken. Next thing that they could remember was that the shuriken were flying towards them with some kind of jutsu added to them making more Shuriken. Kind of like a Clones of the Shuriken. Animal path didn't show much emotion to the attack or anything, instead he started to make some hand signs as a Large cloud of smoke appeared just right above the Bird. A giant panda was noticeable, and since it stood high above the bird, and in the air it had to fall down. Once he started to fall down to the ground it blocked all of the Shuriken that were heading towards the paths, but after that the Giant Panda slammed down on the village crushing many building which lead it to poof away.

Meanwhile as the Panda did its thing Asura path decided to take some action in this battle. Once the Panda wasn't in the way anymore Asura path jumped from the bird as he pulled out his hand that showed a thick cord with missiles attached to it. The missiles got launched out of his arm. Five of the missiles went straight on towards the Raikage, as the other three went on each side of the Raikage completely destroying the building that the Raikage had stood on. Asura path then landed on a building that was just about a couple feet away from the administrative building. Preta path, and Animal path glided around the administrative building were the Raikages office was held looking to see if Asura path had done any damage to Raizo
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Asura path Had noticed that his missiles hadn't done much Damage to the Raikage at all...As a mater of fact it didn't do any Damage to him, only the building which was now nothing. The Raikage must of made some type of Energy force field to block the attack. "We need all of them" Asura path said as he began making hand signs summoning the last three paths At his side. Soon after the explosion had happened a loud roar could be heard, but also cleared the smoke that surrounded the building. From the clearing a ball of compressed Sonic release chakra hurled towards Animal path and preta path on the bird. Preta path smiled as he awaited for the ball of Sonic release chakra to become in reach of him, but once the ball had gotten just about right in front of his he arched his back out making it so his stomach was pointing out and started to absorb the chakra ball tell it was no more.

As Asura path, Human path, and Deva path stood upon the building a clone of the Raikage had appeared on top of the building as well. This clone had claws on all his limbs, and was heading for the three paths trying to attack them. With using his Grativity release Deva path extended his hand out, then quickly pulled it back in causing a large piece of wall to extend from the building and smash into the clone killing it instantly. Now Deva path had no intentions of being were he was because he knew it was just a matter of time before more Cloud shinobi came trying to help there Raikage from being attack. Deva Path and Human path then scattered out of the area, soon finding that two of there shinobi were hiding waiting to attack next to the hot springs. The two paths had slowly made there way to the cloud shinobi, but before they could leave Deva path stopped them using his Grativity release to attract them back over were they were standing. "Your not going any were. You will stay and fight us. Deva path said as clouds slowly rushed over the sky and began to Rain, but his rain had been covered up by someone elses rain. Someone that was near the village gates.....someone that was here to help on the attack. Deva knew that he/she was over there because with his rain falling from the sky he could tell just about everyone that was in the village because his rain was getting interrupted allowing him to sense there presents.

Human path was eager to just kill both of the shinobi, but he couldn't kill the 8 tails because then it would be just about impossible for them to extract the Bijuu from him. "Even know that we are here to kill your Raikage....I guess we could also capture the 8 tailed beast that stands before us Deva path." Human path said while looking at Deva path allowing the two cloud shinobi to over hear their convocation if they had listen close enough. "Indeed...we shall" Deva path replied to Human path as they both prepared them self's for battle. Once again Deva path extended his hand, but quickly pulled it back. Deva path was using his Grativity release to attract the Cloud jounin. (not Bee) With The Cloud jounin coming towards the two paths Human path moved his arm just a bit as his Chakra Disruption Blades was unleashed from his sleeve, he then jumped forwards with the blades point pointing towards the jounin trying to stab him in his chest as he was attracted by Deva paths Grativity release. As that was done Deva path still had an extra hand, but didn't bother to mess with The 8 tails because they wanted to eliminate the jounin before attacking the tailed beast

Meanwhile The Raikage was still sending attacks towards Animal and Preta path that were on the deformed bird high in the air, but they figured that nothing was going to happen unless they got down into the action. So Animal and Preta path jumped away from the bird leaving it to get hit by the ball of chakra that the raikage had cast just moments ago. As Animal path and Preta path landed on the ground Animal path slammed his hand into the ground just after making some hand signs causing a large cloud of smoke to form once again, but it hadn't stayed for long because the three headed body had been rushed towards the raikage with the rinnegan blazing away in his eyes. The three headed dog tried striking the raikage with its sharp claws over and over again because it wasn't going to stop attacking tell it was successful. "The last path doesn't need to be summoned...We will hold out on him for now..."
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As the three paths Preta, Animal and Asura paths stood on top of the building not to far away from the Raikage, they soon noticed that there hearing was messed up allowing them to not be able to hear any such thing. The smartest of the three was Asura, so he knew that to do. Asura Path quickly made hand signs before the clone even popped up behind then and summoned the last path, but wasn't any were near them. The last path was named Naraka path, and was located on the building behind the Raikage and his clone. But this path wasn't here to attack it was there to be Preta, Animal and Asura paths eyes and ears because they all had there eyes closed allowing them to see what Naraka path was seeing. Preta path quickly turned around facing them because he knew what was going on even though he hadn't heard he seen that movement before and knew that the Sonic blasts were coming towards him and quick. He arched his back making his stomach stick out just as the Sonic blast came in reach they all slowly began being absorbed tell is was once again no more, but once all of the Sonic blast had been absorbed Preta path was starting to feel tired...out of energy so he was going to have to regain his energy before fighting. Naraka path had did his job so he began to run the other way towards the other paths because he had a slight feeling that they needed some help.

In the mean time Animal path his eye's on the Raikage because he knew that he had something up his sleeve and was about to pull something, but soon he saw that the raikage had withdrew some shuriken. All three of the paths slightly knew that if they were hit with these shuriken they would be infused with his lighting chakra so they were going to have to avoid them as good as they could. Animal path made some hand signs as the giant panda showed again taking the hit, But the panda wasn't enough it had broken threw the panda and hit Preta path. Animal path was being attacked by a the clone that was sent by Raizo, but since Asura had been free he was going to be taking on the clone because Preta wasn't in a good condition to fight and Animal path was getting ready to make another summoning. Asura Had slightly smile on his face just like always. Upon focusing chakra to his right wrist he pointed his hand towards the clone as he wrist flew off and towards the clone immediately killing it if hit which was really likely to be done because the clone had been focused on the two other paths thinking that the shuriken would of held him off. After the flying wrist flew towards the clone it caused a large whole in the wall so if the clone wouldn't of been killed it would now be in side the building away from all of the paths. "Sasuke" Animal path said trying to get his attention because the Raikage was now gone allowing them to get there hearing completely back.

As Human path was about to stab his Chakra Disruption Blades into the jounin from the cloud it slowly began to rust away, but not all the way enough was left that the blade pierced his body allowing the the Rinnegan eyes to appear in their mind leaving his body incapable to move. Even though the blade only pierced his body a little the Chakra Disruption Blades are the same things the six bodys of pein use to receive there chakra from Nagato. For there making Nagato have little control over the jounin which led to his body not being able to move. With the situation going on now Human path needed to take advantage before he could fully move his body, he quickly reached his hand forwards getting a good grip on the jounin's head then pulling back releasing his hand from his hand. But Human path had removed the jounin's soul just as the wire cast by another jounin pulled back the dead body and the soul that was held in Human paths hand was given to the outer path that had just showed up summoned Naraka path who was hidden. Naraka path had reached the crew so fast because he had flickered from building to building tell he reached the hot springs, but the adrenaline rush he had made his body move faster so that he could reach the other paths. The other people wouldn't be able to see the outer path tell they had been in contact with him.

With Deva paths rain falling hard from the sky he was able to tell that the 8 tails was already on a move to strike Human path for trying to hurt his friend. The eight tailed began to quickly move his body with all seven swords used by just about every part of his body. As the eight tailed got closer and closer to Human path, he knew that he was going to have to fight him head on but wasn't a problem for him. Two more of the Chakra Disruption Blades slipped out of both of his sleeves right into the hands of Human path. as he held them in both of his hands Human path waited to come in contact with the eight tailed so they would have a sword fight.Since it was raining which was caused by Deva path he knew that Someone else was present, but Deva path couldn't use his grativity jutsu because it had only been four seconds but soon he could be able to use it. Deva path knew that the Genin that just showed up wasn't going to be much trouble but if he was then Naraka path would handle him.

Soon crows began to surround the area, which soon led to another Genin appearing but this Genin was trying to attack Deva path with his electricity ball in his hand so Deva path jumped to the side so that his back wasn't facing anyone because he knew what was coming next. Just seconds after the electricity ball was formed the genin would of notice that Deva paths hand was extended and he could move much, Naraka path then jumped behind the Genin with out him knowing as Deva path trusted his hand forwards sending him towards Naraka path. Naraka path Had both of his chakra deception blades in his hand as he jumped forwards trying to stab his blades in his back which would of resulted in not being able to move and soon death all depending on were he had hit and if he had hit. Deva path then jumped to the side as he hoped that he wouldn't get attacked and the time would pass by fast.

Meanwhile as they three paths stood over were the Raikage was Animal path made some hand signs as he slammed his hands onto the ground causing a large cloud of smoke to appear. Human path then was raised in the air as the cloud of smoke disappeared a Giant Snake-Tailed Chameleon stood under the Human path. The Giant Snake-Tailed Chameleon opened its mouth as his tongue stretched out allowing Human path to jump onto his tongue. the Snake-Tailed Chameleon then put his tongue back into his mouth with Human path inside of it as they both became invisible to the human eye, but really all that was going on was that the Chameleon was blending in with its surroundings. Only Human path and maybe the other paths knew that he wasn't in his same spot that he was on the move. Preta path then rose from his knee as his energy was just about fully regained...well enough to were the point for him to stand and be ready to fight. Preta path was going to be following or fighting with sasuke so he awaited for him to respond to him.


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PostSubject: Re: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 6:53 am

overall it's good, but there are a few things I would like to take out. Please remove any jutsu referring to ripping out a persons soul. We agreed that you can only control three bodies at once, so that will remain so. The deva paths Shinra Tensei is limited to once per every 2 posts, using the large version increases wait time to 5 posts as to simulate the actual cool down time. If a path is ever killed, it will take 100 sentences to replace it as to simulate a new body actually being found. Lastly paths cannot be healed mid battle, or will take around 7- 10 posts, depending on the health, where if the path that does the healing is damaged it will be cut short. As to avoid healing mid fight to just continue. Edit those things and you will be approved. The king of hell will instead drain health for each lie, instead of killing liars

Sorry for the overall demands, we just do not want to have people screaming god mod for everything you do.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 12:11 pm

First we did agree that i can only control three body's at once, but that doesn't mean i can't have the other ones there if i need them. This way each time i can use a different body, instead of using the same three every time. Why would you put a limit on Deva paths Shinra Tensei? when there is already a limit of five seconds which will just about come out to one or two post all depending on what happens. I'm not sure were you read that the paths can heal them selfs mid battle but it can't happen only Naraka Path has the power to do so but it would take time because he would have to summon king of hell. Its just like in the show i didn't change anything of his but just give him Lighting Release. To the ripping out souls its the same as in the show so i don't understand why i would have to remove them. I would have to get a hold of the top of someones head thus allowing me to do so. And i'm not a Gm person i know how to work these paths and there powers trust me its really doesn't seem that hard as it looks.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 1:03 pm

Its probably how I worded it, but it actually seems we agree on everything you actually said. Since i meant shinra tensei is only useable every 2 posts so in the end....its pretty much the same stuff. I see where your coming from with the soul, problem, and I trust that you aren't a GM person, but understand not everyone will. But alright...this is good.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 3:52 pm

Alright, but i still need to add my known jutsu...we can do that right?
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PostSubject: Re: Shikamatsu (Done)   Shikamatsu (Done) EmptyFri Feb 26, 2010 4:42 pm

there is a jutsu section for that, just put your characters name and as the topic and put the jutsu in the post
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