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PostSubject: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:52 am


General Character Info

Name: Kenzaki Ryusaku

Nickname/Alias: --

Age: 16

Birthdate: 31st of March

Gender: Male

Height: 177 cm

Weight: 61 kg

Appearance:

Anbu Appearance
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Jounin Appearance
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Daily Appearance:
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Personality:

Rarely seen angry or without a smile, Kenzaki has a warm and friendly personality and stops any arguments that occurs between his comrades. He make friends with everyone, and if not friendship, at least respect. He is always seen smiling at everybody even to people who never likes his personality which says "Good morning" to all people he meets, even to his opponents. At times, he acts childish especially when asking apologize or when he enter at serious talks. Despite of being friendly, Kenzaki is also a good friend especially when became very close to them like teammates. If he he sees a friend which has a problem, he cheers them up advising some idiomatic words or comparing another object to solve other peoples problems.

He remains calm during life-or-death struggles. Because of staying calm in battles, he rapidly learns and understands a situation better than anyone. Kenzaki had never been seen panicking or very frightened because of the opponent's power, he may be seen surprised because of unexpected things happening, he could quickly show his smile that would cover all his negative emotions. Even in death, he stated that he won't remove his smile whatever happens. He just want to smile, because he already found the best of himself.

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Nindo: "Always expect the unexpected .. "

Clan Information

Clan Name: --

Clan Symbol: --

Kekkei Genkai:

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A unique dōjutsu kekkei genkai ability similar to the Byakugan. It includes penetrating vision, disrupting eye-based kekkei genkai, and a unique chakra particle extension. He had the ability to use his vision abilities to penetrate the walls of his small shack and view the outside world and perform genjutsu that can fool even the Byakugan. This ability does not appear to have the range of the Byakugan, but it actually has the ability to counter that Hyūga trait. User's vision also lets him locate and track others by sensing chakra, picking up chakra from long distances, and noticing changes in an individual's chakra. It is also able to sense how many individuals are present.

User's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers not unlike the Sharingan, meaning he can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move. He can also see one's life force, allowing him to determine a body if it is still alive. When activated, user's eyes momentarily glow red ripple pattern.
Clan History:

The doujutsu was believed as a legend or myth that only exist on stories and imagination. Hundred years later, a group of missing-nin was attacked by a single enemy named "Hyper Blade". Only one person live and reported what happened into the ambush. He also described what the enemy looks like but he only saw his eyes. "His eyes were in ripple pattern with scary red color" that was the description he gave and was scattered all over the Ninja Nations. There were consecutive murder and ambushed happened, and all of the evidence were pointing on the same person. One of the Feudal Lords, 2nd Tsuchikage, and the most popular missing-nin, Nigiri. All of the mentioned persons had a connection on the organization Akatsuki so some of the Nations were treating him as a hero and some were treating him as a bounty target. The Hokage was interested on the unknown assasin and tried to capture him was he failed. Hyper Blade disappeared on the battle in just a blink and no information was received after the battle. Plenty of years passed and another person from Waterfall Country possessed the doujutsu named Kenba. He was assasinated and disappeared in just a blink. Then another person from Lightning Country possessed the doujutsu again, his name was Ryusaku Kenzaki, a kind and simple Genin who has a great talent on ninja arts, he was attacked many times but always savedby his eye, now, he is part of the Anbu, the youngest among them and tries to cut the chain on battle.

Rank/Village Information

Rank/Classification: Anbu/Jounin

Village: Kumogakure No Sato

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu [Taijutsu] , Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu

Note: For those who don't know, Kenjutsu is a part of Taijutsu though it uses weapons but it still uses the body. For elemental sword techniques, it would be considered as Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu and also considered as B+.

Elemental Affinity: Water [Suiton], Wind [Futon]

Fighting Style:

Flash Step: Shunpo is a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the bases of this technique is speed. The user will pump a exact amount of raiton based chakra into their legs for a split second dramatically increasing the speed which they can move. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point the shinobi's house to the Hokage's Building in the least amount of steps.

Equipment/Weapns:

Equipment / Weapons:

  • 3 Fuma Shuriken
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  • 8 smoke bombs
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  • 10 shuriken
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  • Summoning Paper
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  • Clan Scroll
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  • Tanto set [7]
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  • 1 Customized Katana
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History/RP Sample

History/Background Story:

Kenzaki was born in a small but peaceful village Otogakure no Sato of the Fire Country. He was a member of one of the most powerful clans ever in the ninja world. Her mother stays on their house to take care of him while his father was an experienced Jounin, while his brother was an Anbu. Most of the time, his family is very busy especially his father who is from them so the only people in the house is Kenzaki and his mother. He only plays by himself because his mother doesn't want him to go outside the house so that he could help on the household chores. The only people he can play with was his older brother once a year and his cousins once a week but even though he could be playing multiple times a day, he wasn't contented on it that's why he manage to find other things to be busy of. He doesn't want to play because he just want to have a bond with his father to teach him some basic ninjutsus but he waited for long time, it didn't happen.

A pleasant night came where night insects synchronizes their voices, night owls were spying on every corner of the trees, and the cold breeze of the air when it whispers. It was a peaceful night on the village while little Kenzaki was still awake still hoping for his brother and father to come for good. His mother who had been busy all day doing several household chores was already sleeping on her bed while Kenzaki was watching at the dark sky through window. Moment passed when he heard fast steps on the grassy field, he can't see it but he can feel it coming. Kenzaki immediately closed his window and covered himself with blanket. He was shivering not because of coldness but because of the fear. He suddenly heard consecutive explosions located on different spots of the village. Screams of the neighbors awakened all the few civilians, some were running, and some were trying to hide. It was a group of ninjas from Sound Village attacking their small village because they want to steal the land. There were some of civilians who became ninjas in Konoha before trying to fight the Oto ninjas back. Roads were filled with blood and image of dead bodies that were stucked into Kenzaki's mind. Hopefully, a group of Konoha Jounin helped and defended the small village. Only few civilians survived the massacre some were injured, including Kenzaki who lost his mother, he can't remember anything but dead bodies of people around the village. Instead of attacking back, the Konoha Jounin brought the remaining civilians into the Konoha to heal their wounds and to give them a regular home. Kenzaki was confined in the hospital with open and shivering eyes because of the trauma. After few months, Kenzaki's trauma wear off and became a different person. He is now serious and doesn't smile not like before that has been sweet and cheerful. He also felt anger when knowing that his dad had also made a family on the Konoha that has been an insult for his loving mother.

When he reached the age of seven, his father undoubtly adviced him to enter the academy. He wasn't that happy and excited like before, he doesn't know the reason. When he entered the academy, he was indifferent to all of his fellow students. He never felt like joining or talk to them. Even it was the first day of class, it cannot be denied that almost all of the girls got a crush on him but he just acted like he doesn't care. He has no interest because he focused himself on becoming strong. He never have a friend even though everyday, a lot of students want to know him. Boys may call him boastful, but girls never gave up on getting close to him. The academy life was challenging to him, he excellently impressed everyone on all of the skills ha have shown that's why no girl could ever hesitate him to be a lover someday. Each day of class, he increased his efforts, and when he came back to their house, he immediately go to his room and review his subjects and other things that has to be reviewed. When he reached the age of 11, he graduated the academy and still he has no friends but full of fame.

When graduated the academy, Kenzaki doubled his efforts to get a great power. Still, he never shown any smile to one of his teammates. On missions, he saves his teammates but only treat it as a responsibility of a teammate, not as a concerned friend. When off-duty, Kenzaki just go to place where he can't hear any sound of anybody, just be with himself. Even though his father keeps on telling that he's proud on Kenzaki, still, he can't feel his father's sincerity on saying it that's why he has a complicated personality. On his free times, he just watch clouds while lying into the grassy field and compares himself that Clouds are far from him but always there watching him. That thing encouraged Kenzaki to not change and remain the same. One day, a group of bandits attacked their house for getting a high interest on a forbidden scroll of his father. Kenzaki released all his emotions and kicked all the bandit's butt. The only people in the house were Kenzaki and his mother so he has a lot of wounds on his body. He had a couple of months on the hospital so he read books while he can't move to fill his knowledge. After months on the hospital, Kenzaki filled his knowledge and trained immediately to fill the times he wasn't there.


RP Sample:

Reikon had been standing on the ledge, watching his uncles minions with wicked delight. A race of warriors totally bent on hatred. Even as he watched them now, in the monstrous underground cavern they fought amongst themselves. There was hacking and slashing, ripping and tearing, punches and kicks, shoves and pulls. He like one particularly. A brutish warrior, standing at least 2 feet taller than the rest. He had been watching him, this creature rip his enemies apart. He sprayed the floors of the cavern with red waves of crimson glory, watching each drop land before he moved on to his next enemy. At one point he lost his sword, and had ripped up body parts from a slain brethren and fashioned a deformity of a weapon. Half of his jaw was missing, his ear had been sliced halfway down the middle, and one of his eyes hung out of its socket, yet the creature still fought.

He clapped his hands once, his demonic heritage holding large authority in these many realms of hell. The fighting ceased, the wounded healed and regenerated and the dead reanimated by demonic powers and stood in single file lines, thousands of these warriors. He pointed to the big one, and motioned his finger for him to follow. He had pick one more then he would begin his mission. He explained the mission to the two brutes, of which he had to give extra time to explain they were not to kill each other. The mission was simple. A ninja had taken refuge in a home with some civilians. He had boasted about knowing the secret to defeating Reikon's creators, his father and his two uncles. So he needed to be killed. He was, as of now, walking with the two mere spawns of hatred at his side.

His image shimmered and flickered, like a dying holograph. Skin gave way to slimy, half-skin half-flesh, that was suddenly painted with a deep black hatred. Horns of the goat grew on his head, his teeth and gums rotted and fell out to reveal new rows of razor like teeth, with a grin that was wide as a crocodiles. His feet were replaced with hooves and 3 tails grew, with spines made of bone growing out of them. His fingernails fell off and his fingers shriveled up, to be violently replaced by claws several inches long. Most of all though, his eyes. They had bleed with the intensity of a waterfall and then exploded, leaving two films of sick black blood in his eye sockets. He saw the world fair enough though, and he was ready for his mission. He flicked his wrist, pointed a long, clawed finger at the house. The brutes charged into the house. There were screams and sounds of a scuffle until a few minutes later the brutes had come out of the house. One brute had dragged the and older female, a little boy, a young woman, and the dead corpse of a man. The brute had a knife in the side of his jaw but he also had a tuft of hair clamped in between his teeth, the hair still attached to the head. He threw the decapitated body to the ground with much hate, as if he could almost will the corpse to explode with fury and gore.

The other monument of hatred had come out with the struggling ninja. Reikon smiled then waved to the brute, he had abandoned his weapon for the pleasure of forcing his hand through the mans stomach, and pushing with his inhuman strength until the entire mans body had ripped in half. The small boy had screamed and the two women nearly fainted. The radiance coming off them was a sweet elixir to Reikon. He was basking in their emotions of horror, and hatred for these creates and for Reikon himself. He nodded to the to the brute with the two women and the boy. He through one of the women to the other brute and both of them began to mual and ravage their bodies, spraying themselves with blood and gore and gorging themselves on their flesh. Reikon walked up to the frightened boy. The boy whimpered, like a lost puppy. Reikon knelt down and held his arms out, as if to comfort the boy. The boy was confused, he didn't understand. Reikon in his now gravely, hissing voice embraced the small boy in his horrid form. "Hush now little one. It will be over soon, you've no need for these tears."

With that Reikon rose up, leaning back slightly, his mouth opening up at an impossible size. His rows of teeth gleamed in the moonlight night and he lunged down, swallowing a sickening who half of the boys body in his mouth. He clamped down hard as a sickening crunched noise could be heard. The boys upper half had been separated. The dark films of blood passing as his eye seemed to impossibly glow, as dark as they were by the spraying of blood on the inside of his mouth, and the twitching of the little boys upper body inside his mouth. He began chewing the flesh, bones cartilage all of its. A mixture of saliva and blood began to stream out of his mouth, as he swallowed the gory mess in his mouth, licking his lips with a satisfying smack at the end. He turned to the two brutes he had brought and pointed to the house. "Get inside the house, and once your there burn it and stay in the house. Fight each other if you want but keep it in the house!" With that he turned away and began walking back to his village, his evil deed would go by unnoticed of that he was sure. [/center]


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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:55 am

Basic Techniques:
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Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.

Advaced Basic Ninjutsu:
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Name: Kai (Dispel)
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
A jutsu that destroys/cancels out an illusionary jutsu attempted on the user. Only shinobi with strong chakra control can perform this. The user releases a large amount of chakra then quickly halts it. The genjutsu is usually dispelled after that, depending on how strong the skill is.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu, 瞬身の術, literally "Body Flicker Technique"
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Description:This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha, one of the most talented Uchiha, was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui?) , likely referring to this technique.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: D
Element: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The wire allows the user to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Element:-
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Unlike other clone techniques, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. This makes the technique ideal for spying, since the user can simply send a clone to spy on a target, then have the clone disperse itself without returning to pass the information back to the user. Any extra chakra the clone has when it disperses is also returned to the original.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:24 am

I'm sorry but at the moment kyuubi isn't open, (we all know why)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:51 am

why ?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:35 am

Opness, its also one of those things we want people to earn

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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:38 pm

Move the jutsu part of your app into the jutsu app section. They'll be reviewed separately. Also, I'll have to talk with Ryusaki about that "flash step" fighting style. It's very similar to a style I created using water/lightning techniques.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:49 am

if your using it with water style .. then your style would be very different from mine ..
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:05 pm

1) Be more descriptive in your "flash step" technique. As it stands, you've taken a technique mastered by a kage (see 4th Raikage in series), and upgraded it... as a jounin.

2) Calm Zone technique - it can deactivate chakra (sounds like gentle fist, and I know the difference, just making a reference), but, there's a "chance" that it will put caster in same predicament. Not only that, but since it recycles chakra, essentially the caster has unlimited chakra while in it. OP.

3) Calm Zone "Stop" - The technique itself contradicts. How would a shadow clone hold the technique if the technique itself stops chakra. A shadow clone is a technique within itself, and cannot be maintained without chakra. Even if the clone is created prior to tech, it would disperse because of the tech. The clone cannot be created once the tech is cast because the user's chakra is already negated.

4) You have to fill out a separate app to create a clan. See: Clan Rules and Clan Applications

5) You have to fill out a separate app to create jutsu. See: Jutsu Applications, Jutsu Rules, and Banned and Regulated Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:18 am

actually .. i haven't checked my own jutsu yet .. because i'm not finished .. but if you let me finish my app .. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:07 am

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Once you become capable you can always turn your bloodline into a clan, though there will be a limited number of five to 7 clans allowed at once.

dude .. i don't understant its point .. is this mean that the shinobi could posses multiple clans ??
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:04 pm

Meh just finish, and he meant, eventually you can make your BL available to other people

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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaku, Kenzaki   Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:13 am

Done ..
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