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SirJay23



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PostSubject: SirJay23's character application   Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:30 am

Name: Yoshida Takeshi

Nickname: "Takeshi the White Fang"

Weight: 120 lbs.

Height: 5' 4"

Age: 14

Gender: M

Rank: Genin

Village: Moon

Elements: Lightning

Personal Info:

Familiy: Mother and Sister

Clan: Yotsuki

Bloodline: Raiden

Tatoos: Right tricep has a tatoo of a white tiger.

Scars: None

Looks: http://public4.tektek.org/img/av/0909/d03/0114/cdac593.png

Equipment

Weapons: Crossblade shuriken, and at Jounin rank he inherites his grandfather's "Lightning Lash" Sword; sword imbude with lightning.

Armor: None

Equipment: Standard kunai and shuriken, first aid, explosive tags

Extra Info

Bio: Yoshida Takeshi was born in the Moon village and was raised by his mother, along with his older sister. His parents originated from the Lightning village, until they were divorced. Thus his mother, while pregnant with Takeshi, took his sister and left to a different village. His mother and sister remained nomadic until she reached the Moon village, in which she went into labor. The doctors here took good care of her and helped her during birth. After she gave birth to Takeshi, she decided to stay in the Moon village to raise her children, so they can have stable lives. As the two children grew up, the mother taught the daughter to behave like a lady and the son to be a man...and a ninja. Not to say her daughter CAN'T be a ninja, its just that the mother didn't want her daughter to live the same lifestyle she lived. They're mother left the Lighning village as a Jonin, but left with good grace from the Raikage because he knew the circumstances she was in. The father, who wasn't a ninja, was a hard working carpenter and couldn't stand the fact that his wife was a ninja after he found out; he was clearly a old fashioned shovanist. So, in order to rid her of her title, he spread lies about her all of the village; despite her having a child with him and one on the way. He soon divorced her after the lies became so intense that the daughter was beginning to be ridiculed and harassed by adults; he left them on their own to save his own hide. The mother wanted to end his life, but instead went to the Raikage for help. He agreed that the husband tarnished her reputation beyond repair, and they both agreed for her and her family to leave the village. He gave her a pardon, 500,000 ryou, plenty of food, clothes, water, horse carriage, and an escort in order to survive until she finds a suitable home. 14 years later, the mother decides that Takeshi and his sister are old enough to know about their heritage; especially since Takeshi is about to graduate from the Academy. Takeshi and his sister learn about their terrible father, but also learns about their mother's proud heritage. Their mother came from a lineage of powerful shinobi, and she was herself. Their grandfather especially, nicknamed White Tiger, who rivaled the Raikage with S-rank status. His nickname mostly derived from his fighting style and the white fang that stuck out of his mouth. Takeshi also has the genetic feature, that's why he was given the nickname "Takeshi the White Fang" by his peers. The mother made it clear how dangerous and hard it is to be a shinobi, especially a female, which convinced the sister that maybe it was good that she was raised differently than Takeshi. Takeshi vowed to be nothing like his father, and instead be like his mother and her ancestors; become a powerful shinobi and create his own legend!

RP Sample:

At the Academy, people gathered in front of the school after the graduation ceremony; shinobi and villagers alike. The sky is clear this morning with a slight cool breeze, giving the early summer a good kickoff. Families surround the young graduates in burgundy gowns, giving hugs, kisses, and gifts. Families begin to leave, some heading home while others are overheard chatting about eating out and going to an event. But of course there is one family that needs to be focused on, and that is Takeshi's family. "Awwww, look at my little man! I'm so proud of you!" his mother says, giving him a big kiss on the forehead. "Mom!! Mizu is probably around! Your going to embarass me!" Takeshi complains after wiping off the kiss. "Yeah mom, your messing up lover boy's image. From loser to momma's boy! Hahahah!" his sister says, pointing and laughing at her brother. "Shut the hell up!" Suddenly the mother smacks him upside the head. "Takeshi, don't talk to your sister like that! And you, leave your brother alone!" The daughter folds her arms and chuckles to herself. "Anyway, Takeshi you've completed a milestone in your shinobi career. You should be very proud of yourself, I'm sure your grandfather is proud!" the mother then put her arm around his shoulders. "Yeah I am Mom...I'm just a little nervous now..being an official shinobi and all.." The mother than laughed and said,"Oh don't worry about it! You have my blood in you, you'll be terrific!" The sister even gave some encouragement,"Yeah midget, I have to admit I'm proud of you as well.. So don't fail and make our family look like idiots, okay?" The sister then laughed and gave Takeshi a warming hug. "See that's more like it! Alright guys, I'm starved and I know you all are starved so lets get the hell out of here!" the mother said. "Awww, I wanna open my gift! But, if you insist...let's go to Teriyaki Steakhouse!" Takeshi cheered. The sister chimmed in and the mother nodded her head in approval, with a smile on her face. The kids cheered as the family walked off campus and onto the Main Street towards the restaraunt.


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PostSubject: Re: SirJay23's character application   Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:32 pm

Only thing wrong with this is the lightning sword. Since I see that you have chosen a BL then you cannot have a custom weapon at chuunin, as you can only gain one at jounin. But like I said in the new rule, if you'd rather a custom weapon now in place of a BL you can do that too.

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PostSubject: Re: SirJay23's character application   Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:19 pm

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